Ive got my own twist using my own style, i in no way will re-publish this (i have major respect for a fellow wordsmith) and in no way am i degrading your piece. and actually the way your poem is written jagged is pretty clever because it is a reflection of the jagged,unmedicated mind.

Silence pries at tongue's root.
The thirsts...screams unspent
Dusty cracked red bow-wrapped 
A "drink me"-tagged thrift store Vile 
Just call me " Alice", baby.
Drain grudging stream
Viscous,Noxious
draught full measured gleam
for a heart parched 
lacked a dream
- grow Grow GRow GROw GROW-
- PAIN...
   BIGGER THAN LIFE-
BLACK FLOOD , Black blood
Drowning myself in my premeditated,unmedicated hell
bursting forth the walls of my cell
Where is my accursed elixir?!
The one that makes this all go away?
A mad Hatter company
A brew of Earl Grey
Is it Ponder in wonderland?
or is it wonder in ponderland?
Blunt trauma has taken its toll
Maybe I shouldnt have gone head first down the rabbit hole...

(Sorry if my work seems ameteurish, im only 17) but very well done!